Notes (remote

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  the man with an eye sees
                              hand writes
                  hand strokes
                                  his mouth opens
                           her gates
                               'once' inside    he's running riding walking climbing into   streets avenues, boulevards,  her arms brocades , breaches her barriers  ,, her routes, 
      legs, awnings, tents, arcades,  her trampolines  a behemoth love a breath a                     
                  sunlight  a feeling of   birth breath
                               a breeze summering round the edge of   his lips    


Not a mote in the eyes

cries  remoteless