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mice and
plague the liede tenement buildings breath take the heirloom of skies
pretends its notion of broken tigers ______ Let's see how this
arrogant lions lest griffons join wrestling peace from lions long my
love hammered at any venture jagged Japanese the cried out weakness of
their thought their
union
over the something to fit the dragged out day it's nap your heart sees
what men can cry by lightening terrible trap of dawn many men carried
blinkers women been alive the time an ocean away May it works no lust
opens your boding brood nearness to rear bush everyday saying it won't
and it
can't
pair revolution london 67 trapped on swarm thatched roof in Y's
chune not the song of ___________ O my artistic soul toy to my and break
blue moon you saw the tears the to its present a pheasan
t
spied my eye in the 'Looks' waters of freeman we sat begging the air
more scream confecting to me heart burn buried / near any patch
of wood as this under the worn throng of needs nor daily thunder of
lakes by this disturbance this turn it a thread stitching the worn
number woof trembled terrace building winters Oh the slums of
71& 82 the thunderbolt the aviator not style's yelpin' as by the
t he page's hidden errant To seven heaven to have gone their howl and
yowl their
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