and retyping revising this long poem typing again 'inputting' it but let us use that nomination,
as if it were latin ,
a cognate of beauty referring to putting in of material ,, of what was beautiful ,, as the layers
enter ,, find their own spaces of rhythm and time
so the poem already written enters entering its stages of creation a n d
r e c r e a ti on
What is it called ~ it has two titles for the time being
but no ,, it has 2 titles for the time becoming for becoming time in rhythm is what the poem is about as well as the I that is me about me I that is about one who is two and three and many and who is the I of the poem anyhow?
What is the spoken voice the spoken verse of a poem anyhow? what is Anyhow?
Anyhow a poet said as night riled afullsome moon, fat as the dawning dog of day
laughed at the spirits sprites of night as it's called that pin cushion of the sky it's pins of stars
speckled overhead
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So now there's about 40, 000 words and it's not finished yet or O complete
it's at the inbetween state as I ponder the idea of recording the whole thing
And then , as it would be recorded the revisions would play off the sound of it as its read
which is legitimate
however that's a slightly ,, slightly ,, d i f ferent process
than the other form of re-writing
so there's respoken and spoken for the first time
and rewriting and writing for the first time
(which came first? hahahha ) (a thought gives birth to an egg)
they both came first
birth
ovum
egg
simultaneous
-------------------------- genesis an d not genesis
as Adam and Eve in the garden perfect in their simultaneity
a moon and sun
riding the sky of nirvana
and fracture is a machine
not an affect
but making
heralding in its seeing
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It's late~
I am happy when I work
the goal of the artist ~ find the time , the place
to w o r k creation
j o y
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Hello
yes it can cold here v e r y c o l d
but n o w its w a r m
as y our li ps
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