thank you and yes your remarks about ,, temporality ,, punctuation of subvocal and inward head voice versing lips as accurate as can be to the wish breath not the dime but the arrow which flies a bouncing ,,,, ball ,,, ba,, ,,

_________________________________Thank You SO MuCh Corry ShoRes

for

2 JAN 2011

Clifford Duffy's New Work on Time

Another beautiful Clifford Duffy poem, "fantasy 2010 labour work" at ReCall to Poetry. But it's always best to see his works where they first appeared.

"fantasy 2010 labour work" by Clifford Duffy

(Thanks so much, Clifford Duffy)

What about this new use of commas? Are they commas as pauses? Do these new usages of pauses free language's temporality?


 and for 

Animated GIF is a glimpse of Clifford Duffy's "fantasy 2010 labour work" found at:

http://recalltopoetry.blogspot.com/2010/12/fantasy-2010-labour-work.html