drafted

___________________as in

every draft is a revision
  every  vision  revisionary of the topos
                    the troops of desire's far factory
                 its tumble and mock woods
               its boots and lather ...  assembly line agency of its pith drift mockingbird of its lovedrum

 and out

every draft is a revision
  every  vision  revisionary of the topos

                    the troops of desire's far factory
                 its tumble and mock woods
               its boots and lather ...  assembly line agency of its pith drift mockingbird of its lovedrum

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