ange(l) ha(u)nche

between where these words fit
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The primal lover covered in sperm ~



(some of the phrases in this text are worthy of the  outthedoors throw itaway why did you write this _

Ange ~ mais un ( the worst verse you've written Cries Mona~!) Over here she cries circus Mister D! this is better __For every chevron Mona has a verse. Transverse over

ange

qui

vives dans

vos hanches      (this line has to be re-written Mister Duffy!)
              

un homme

entre ange

et loup



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________________Territoire des vivants et des morts ~ (weak!) (but why ?) the words dont resonate

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this aint bad_____________________________________________________

these eyes mine are sore, no, not the eyes, but the forehead. new glasses and they're Not working so well Yet. We shall see won't we mister poetry.