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you write bad 'pomes' better than anyone I know Mister Duffy
I know, I know I work at it .
'like commas'
you prefer idiom dialect and good old fashioned idiolect!
or just plain idiot!
ya well poetry is purple when it's not prose.
is that how your novel starts?
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Some of the things you toss here
well compared to ... summer day
or moon horned ridge
are apocalyptic peak-cocks
rainyday weirdo dog of the laminations
of french-canada. a longing for france.
deep in yer bowel.s yer brain is a refusnik.
meantime. the Soviet union is over.
EMpire. There is New Empire.-
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so you go back and forth between
two apartments. work in wrought iron steel.
gates of heaven . swing. open. roar. of sea. mast of ship
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on the high sea.
of this bucaneer.
cabin.
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you write bad 'pomes' better than anyone I know Mister Duffy
I know, I know I work at it .
'like commas'
you prefer idiom dialect and good old fashioned idiolect!
or just plain idiot!
ya well poetry is purple when it's not prose.
is that how your novel starts?
-----------
Some of the things you toss here
well compared to ... summer day
or moon horned ridge
are apocalyptic peak-cocks
rainyday weirdo dog of the laminations
of french-canada. a longing for france.
deep in yer bowel.s yer brain is a refusnik.
meantime. the Soviet union is over.
EMpire. There is New Empire.-
------------
so you go back and forth between
two apartments. work in wrought iron steel.
gates of heaven . swing. open. roar. of sea. mast of ship
---------------
on the high sea.
of this bucaneer.
cabin.
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