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all persons right and wrong ill see you soon Mona on the road across the axle the tune
plays back or forward on this outward bound top and bottom the sail a cutter
bounty
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Poetry as a Way of Life Expression _this poetry of the future_ what are becomings to be exists now yet exists on aural virtual visual plane and is a process of definition in and fiction| and other spaces of desire |clicks the rhizome space. criss cross frontiers mix melodies perform verse machines magics boundaries as usual A Recalltopoetryisawayof life and so many others et tant d'autres et tant d'autre_
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all persons right and wrong ill see you soon Mona on the road across the axle the tune
plays back or forward on this outward bound top and bottom the sail a cutter
bounty
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You wrote six bad poems this week
ain't that a shame?
It must have been the moon
& the VPI or some nether short circuit
wouldn't you say? tween the night an day
midts of anarchic & archaic
tape recorders reel to reel
the futurist sings red
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join wrestling peace cried out weakness of their thought my artistic soul toy to my london 67 trapped on the tears the to its present time an ocean away May it and break blue moon you saw we sat begging the air more something to fit the dragged out brood nearness to rear bush everyday what men can cry by lightening not the song of __________
_ O in the 'Looks' waters of freeman buried / near any patch of their union over the swarm thatched roof in Y's chune a pheasan t spied my eye from lions long my love hammered carried blinkers women been alive the at any venture jagged Japanese the terrible trap of dawn many men scream confecting to me heart burn ______ Let's see how this arrogant
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Lets not name it a 'draft' rather versions of the text as its displayed from differing view points
w which one seems to work better for me and presumably some hypothetical reader/listener
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https://recalltopoetry.blogspot.com/2024/09/sonnet-1.html#more
_______ As a prose poem it changes with other changes
les routes sourdes perdaient leurs ailes
et l'homme grandissait sous l'aile de silence
homme approximatif comme moi comme toi et comme
les autres silences
-- from l'hommme approximatif
t. tzara
“All my poems were__[are] on parole “
alll my poemsare on vacation
holiday
on Strike
do leave cash
hiatus is a rhetorical term
it's a point of view
_____________the idea of hiatus is a course in redirected thinking or tinkering or what is memory? but of the now...
yes Mona and Jill and Franny discovering new ways of folding,___of becomings-text __ newer employments,
akin to new envelopments […]
but what always matters is folding, unfolding, refolding.Ravelling rapelling composing