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2024/11/28

that 1st sonnet

 https://recalltopoetry.blogspot.com/2024/09/sonnet-1.html#more

 
 
It's going to need 'looking at ' as the   'English say ' in England and not 

   in Montreal's broken butchered English, hemmed in . as it is,



_______  As a  prose poem it changes  with other changes

 

 

 

mice and plague the lied tenement buildings of breath take the heirloom of skies pretends its notion of broken tigers C ______ Let's see how this arrogant lions lest griffons join wrestling peace from lions long my love hammered at any venture jagged Japanese the cried out weakness of their thought their 
 
 
union over the something to fit the dragged out day it's nap your heart sees what men can cry by lightening terrible trap of dawn many men carried blinkers women been alive the time an ocean away May it works no lust opens your boding brood nearness to rear bush everyday saying it won't and it 
 
 
 
 
can't pair revolution Paris 68 I was trapped on swarm thatched roof in Y's chune not the song of ___________ O my artistic soul toy to my and break blue moon you saw the tears the to its present a pheasan
 
t spied my eye in the 'Looks' waters of freeman we sat begging the air more scream confecting to me heart burn buried / near any patch of wood as this under the worn throng of needs nor daily thunder of lakes by this disturbance this turn it a thread stitching the worn number woof trembled terrace building winters Oh the slums of 71& 82 the thunderbolt the aviator not style's yelpin' as by the t he page's hidden errant To seven heaven to have gone their howl and yowl their 


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